Tuesday, March 20, 2012

Entry 1- Draft 2

My Inquiry question is Does the mother's nurturing role in a child's early life affect the way the child interacts with others mentally, emotionally, and physically later in life? I chose this as my inquiry question because I have a curiousity about the affects that mother's have on their children and how the amount of nurturing that a mother gives a child affects them later on in life. I feel that this is an area that has really not been studied much but I feel like in researching this I can further understand the affects of a mother's nurturing and why it is important. I feel that this is an important quiestion to ask because it allows us to study the different situations that children grow up in and to study the impact that their surroundings has on their life in the present and in the future.

I was first interested in this question because I want to understand how influencial our mother's still are in todays generation and in our lives. I also wanted to learn how children are impacted differently when they grow up with the absense of a nurturing mother and the emotional support that a mother can provide. I believe that people should care about this subject because it allows everyone to understand the effects that mother's have on their children in a generation where we feel that our parents do not dictate who we are and who we become.

1 comment:

  1. I just came from commenting on the Draft 1 of this entry, and already I can see a big improvement! You went deeper into what specifically you will be focusing in on for your topic and that helped me get a better understanding. Also, something that I thought you did a good job on was why you chose the topic which was also a suggestion I had left on your first draft. I think doing this makes the reader have a more personal connection to you and they get more curious to know what you've uncovered. The only thing I can think of for you to do, would be to make the beginning a bit more attention grabbing. Maybe with a quote, statistic or something that will make me eager to read all you've done!
    -Kaitlynn

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