I have read over one journal that was based on a study of how mothers play a certain role in a childs life but it also explains a lot about how a father impacts a childs life. Therefore I am not sure that it is a narrow enough topic to help answer my question because there is so much information dedicated to talking about the father I am not sure if it is a good idea to use as a possible source.
I believe that it is valuable information but I do not know that there is enough to concentrate only on the research that it covers about the mothers verses the amount it covers with the fathers.
In order to gain the reader's attention in my final blog I am going to try to use a question to pull the reader in.
I liked that the information you chose to share that contradicted your original research question was about the father's influences on children and how they grow up. This was something I was hoping you'd cover at some point because the fathers are also a big impact. The only thing I would say to consider in the entry would to go into more detail about what this source said about the fathers. It left me wondering the specifics and what exactly the author had said to back up the statement.
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